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I keep on walking,
I keep on talking,
I keep on tripping,
I keep on falling...

I fall to the ground,
Covered in my blood,
I cry out in pain,
"Is my death in vain?"

Will someone help me?
Will I get up again?
Why even me?
Why, just... Why?
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Something else that just popped into my head......

Copyright 2008 Jonny Dark Studios.

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:iconshinyshine13:
Your writing is always fantastic. Morbid yet fantastic.

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C'est la vie
:iconjonny-dark2:
i always think it's horrid..... morbid and horrid.....
:iconshinyshine13:
It is not horrid! It is very good! I am no good at writing poems but I love to read them. I love your poems.

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C'est la vie
:iconomgiluvyew:
It's Lovely 8D

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For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.

For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.

And for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
:iconjonny-dark2:
why, when they're always dark and painful?....
:iconjonny-dark2:
why does everyone say that?....
:iconshinyshine13:
Because to me they are good. I did not feel the way you did when you wrote it so I do not feel the same when I read it I suppose. =/ Or maybe it is just because it was you who wrote it. I am not too sure. =P

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C'est la vie
:iconomgiluvyew:
Because it's true D: TRUE DAMMIT.

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For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.

For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.

And for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.

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