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High_On_Life by ~Jonny-Dark2:iconJonny-Dark2:

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-- Verse 1 --
I'm high on life,
So much to do,
Going so fast,
I can't think right!

Voices rush past,
Time slows down,
My heart speeds up,
Oh, my god, what a thrill!

What task is next?
Where do I go?
Who do I meet?
How do I know?

-- Verse 2 --
I run through the woods,
Heart pumping fast,
Tears in my eyes,
I can't take it all!

Going so fast,
My feet can't keep up,
I'm not gonna make it,
I'm gonna fall!

It's all too much,
Why's it all so fast?
Why can't I slow down?
What do I do now?

-- Verse 3 --
I'm flying through the air,
Screaming in pain,
Screaming for help,
Screaming for wings!

I'm fast falling down,
Wind rushing by,
The ground coming up,
Get me outta here!

I don't want to crash,
I don't want to fall,
I don't want to see it all,
Don't want my life to end!

-- Verse 4 --
I've fallen from up high,
I've fallen from so far,
I've fallen and lost it all,
I've fallen in the end...

There's no way I can rise again,
Not the way I had,
There's no way back up there,
Never, never again...

I've fallen for the last time,
Fallen from too high,
For once I really feel at peace,
After losing it all...
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Author's Comments

Started verse 1 when I was running around and carrying things, working... I was "high" kinda..... [Broke my toe some time during that.] Then i sat down, and it all started rushing at me..... Felt like I was "crashing"...... Thus verse 2. Then, later, I couldn't get online and talk to anyone and i was feeling depressed kinda.... And wrote 3 and 4.

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~ShinyShine13 Apr 18, 2008, 9:10:26 PM
Awww. ^-^ Your writing is really good. ^-^ *hugs*

--
C'est la vie
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*Prism-urase Apr 18, 2008, 9:47:12 PM
The syllables made me think it out in rap, just needs a snappy chorus. x3

Pretty cool.
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~Desicat674 Apr 18, 2008, 10:47:02 PM
wow desi impressed

--
Some men arn't looking for anything logical like money. They can't be bought, bullied, reasoned, or negotiated with some men just want to watch the world burn
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~Sabaku-no-gaaralove Apr 19, 2008, 10:58:21 AM
I like that. ^^ You are a good poet.

--
This is what I thought,
I thought you need me,
This is what I thought so think me naïve,
I promise you a heart you'd promise to keep,
Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep
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~omgiluvyew Apr 19, 2008, 12:12:54 PM
Very Nice :D

--
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.

For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.

And for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
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~Jonny-Dark2 Jul 2, 2008, 6:28:50 AM
i'll never understand why...
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~Jonny-Dark2 Jul 2, 2008, 6:29:18 AM
it came into my head as a song.... just can't make the music for it.....
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